TRAPPED(Story)

[Chosen of Mana]

NOTE: All names have been randomly chosen, the battle system & spells are from Tales o eternia. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED!
The 1st post will b on the chars.

Jeff
Age:13
Ht: about 5"8"
Wt. 116lbs
Grade: 7th
Build: Advrage
Passion: Gaming
Jeff is a very negative gamer. He is going through pubirty and is having REALLY BAD issues with zits. He's pretty smart and takes pride in that. He's a fallower not a leader. Recently a new game has come out, IT's online vertual reality(LUCKY!). And baced off of the game tales of eternia. In the game he is a class E+ Inferni Mage

Jake
Age: 12
Ht: About 5'1"
Wt: Light...
Grade: 7th
Passion: Soccer, gaming
Jake is one of Jeff's friends from school, he mainly plays the role of lower ranking officer to some1. After the new game came out he helped Jeff kick cyber *ss. He's a class F+ Inferni swordsman.

Lauren
Age: 11 turning 12 soon
Ht: 4'11"
Grade: 7th
weight: 104lbs
build: average
Passion: just Fun in genral
Lauren was one of Jeff's best friends. Always close no matter what happens. She was reunited with the group through a battle. Pretty random.. . She's a class E+ Inferni fighter

CLASSES
Inferni- a class from Infernia. Baced off the elements of fire, water, & wind, powerful Inferni classes (class >C-)
can use light moves. The strongest Inferni skills have no element and can be used by class >B+.
Clesti- a class from Clestia. Baced off of the elements of ice, thunder & earth, Powerful clesti classes(>C-) can use darkness moves. The strongest Clesti skills have Time element and can be used by class >B+.
Auora-ultimate class, obtained by getting to class S, keeps it's moves from previous classes, and gains either, auora wall, auora(sword, fist, staff, beast, blast paw or hammer) and auora wave OR Darkness from the outer limits, and eternial finality. All are only usable to b used when hp reaches 20%

Swordsman- Uses swords, axes, spears, daggers, long swords and halabreds. In order to learn moves they must raise their slash and thrust stats.
Fighter-Inferni classes use gloves or nuckles while clesti classes use greaves of boots. In order to learn moves they must raise their punch and kick levels.
Mage-Inferni classes use staffs and clesti classes use a small squirrle like creatures that respond to wistles but mainly cast magic. Inferni classes are the only ones that can heal through water arte, Inferni get the crap spells early on and the strongest ones later, while clesti get strong early spells but crud later. They learn moves by raising their expertise in their elements
Pirite- Uses either purses or fists. All special moves involve throwing hammers that cause status elements and tripping on their foe to steal stuff
Gunner-Use guns... All move require charging times, their is no Inferni or clesti classes with these guys, they all have a basic wind, fire and water moves, mid light and dark moves and ultimate unelemental moves.
Katz- Use paws...knows one spell chosen at start and many swiping, stealing and searching moves...odd.
Elegent Blade-Uses long swords. Few moves.

That's it 4 now c ya

[Chosen of Mana]

Chapter 1
"GREAT ANOTHER DETENTION! Grrrrrrrr" Jeff complained, this was serously going to cut in on his gaming time...
"It's your fault" Jake said, "Next time do your homework"
Jeff sighed. His friends had started calling him lazy but intelligant, it wasn't at all a lie just annoying. "It's not like you could survive an hour without my spells anyway, besides don't you have soccer today, we can walk to the arcade together."
"K see ya later" he said before running off to his pratice.
An hour later the two were walking to the arcade down the street.
"What'll we do today" Jake asked me.
"The best choice would to take the usual challange by continuing our path to the crymals and later to Celestia
"K"
The boys walked into the arcade before making their way to the pods. They attached the head band, and face mask as their minds were wisped away to Eternia.

They appeared standing in Mitche city. "Now to find Laur" Jeff mumbled as he approched the battlegrounds. He walked into the stands and arrive right as the final battle started. Lauren Vs. two computer Inferni swordsmen, rank F.
Lauren punched twice, lept into the air, foot out streached doing an aireal spin kick then another while yelling "Swallow Dance!", next she dove down foot first on the foe yelling "Egale Dive!". She defeted the first foe and moved onto the next, who met the same fate.
"That was great laur", I commented.
"Pretty good" Jake added.
"Lets enter the group coloseam matches now" I suggested.
"Sure!" the others said.
Later...
"And another gloious victory to team Jeff!" The announcer yelled, "and now, the final battle!"
A group of Infernis walked up, 3 swordsmen 2 fighters and a mage all rank E-. As usual a bright light blinded our eyes and we appeared on a line, with the coloseam walls on either side, we could only move forwords and back words. As usual jake leaped over all the foes to the farthest one back, laur took the closest one and I started to cast.
"Holy water engulf thy foe!" I yelled, "Spread!" water shot up from under the foe's feet. Lifting them into the air. Lauren took advantage of the position.
"Swallow Dance! Egale Dive!" she spiked the swordsman down. 5 to go...
"Super Lightning Blade!"
"D*mn"
Make that 4 Jake just took out one.
"Triple Kick! Swallow Dance! Egale Dive! Chi!" Yelled a fighter near Jake, first hitting him with three roundhouses then Laur's usual combo followed by getting into a Kamay-Hamay-Ha position and launching blue energy in the shape of a lion's head. Jake's hp dropped by 500 points!
"Undine grant thy foe life!" I yelled as I raised my staff, "Heal!" Jake was fully healed.
The fight went on basically like that, I cast an attack spell, Jake gets hurt, I heal. We were finally down to one foe when.
"ATTENION, ATTENION! THERE HAS BEEN A GLITCH IN THE LOG OUT SYSTEM AND THE ENEMY SPAWN SYSTEM. ALL SHOULD FIND A GROUP AND HEAD TO THE NEAREST TOWN AND LET THE ENPLOYEES HANDLE THE FOES."
Jake and Lauren looked at me.
"They can't control the enemy spawn points. Anywhere anything from a boss to a bunny will appear and they can't stop it. We can't logout either so we'll have to enter a village so the overpowered enployees can handle this."
"But aren't spawn points in this village?" Jake said.
"No, I hope not" Lauren replied.
"The coloseam foes are brought from dungons because something like this would happen" I replied, "We should finish this foe off, thy'll distroy the rest."
"Ummmmmm Jeff, too late!" Lauren yelled pointing to a group of foes advancing into the battle feild to us...
TO BE CONTINUED!!!

[Fall Out Kio†]

That's really cool! lol! You have a great talent for writing!

[Chosen of Mana]

Chapter 2

Jake looked at me, "Should we run or fight?"
"Well when you see 20 Dragons, 40 Infernia's and 20 Celesti's and a REALLY angry swords man what do you do?" I replied scarcasticly.
"Ummmmmmm lets get outta here!" He replied.
As we turned to run a dragon beet us to the exit
"Grand Dasher!" Yelled a female voice, a stone slap jutted out of the ground went back in and another appeared a foot away for the next 20 feet then the first reappeared and behind it the ground shook violently pummling the foes ruducing them down to that single dragon.
"Ummmmmm ok, let's go." I said curious about the one who cast that spell I pondered untill I heard:
"Jeff! JEFF!!"
"O right, Ya ready! AIR THRUST!"
The dragon was surrounded by rapid slashing winds. The wind faded after seven hits giving Jake a good oppertunity. He took 2 good hacks at the dragon, a stab and stabbed 5 times "Swarm!" after the attack he swung up, lightning struck then he swing back down "Deamon Lightning Hammer!"
As he lander lauren punched the dragon twice then a kick followed by three spin kicks "Triple Blossem!" then the Swallow Dance-Eagle Dive combo.
"Burrrrrrrrrn!" I yelled "Eruption" a pool of lava appeared under the dragon and three domes of lava erupted out of the pool. As all foes the dragon's body just faded away.
After that off exsperince we searched around the town, with nothing better to do, we went shopping.
"Lame, sucks, ugly!" I groaned looking at the staffs and maces. Jake ran up to me.
"Jeff look at the stuff I got! A bow, and a green crystal! Half price too!"
"You want to become a wind archer?" I asked.
"Heck yeah, BUT I need a mage to complet the ritiul"
'Great this the part where I have to do some long and boring spell' I thought but out of my mouth came, "Sure! Gimme! Lets see, there was a class on this I know it! O got it, Sylph's power bless thy, show the breeze become a powerful gale! Green crystal and warrior become one!" The crystal became little orbs of green light and flew into Jake's sword, my Tp dropped by half and he just had 2 holographic windows appear b4 him. "Jake learned Air Blade!","Jake learned Healing Wind!". Next he put the bow onto his back and up came "Jake learned Power Arrow!","Jake learned Gale!","Jake learned Wind Arrow!" As the stitisics came up lauren ran over with a women with blue hair and a white beret with a long white dress.
"Guys this is the one who casted the spell! Her name's Shizel, Shizel meet Jeff and Jake", Lauen said
"Nice to meet you" I tried to say as politly as I could but she was a Clelestian and a strong one at that, I'd guess she could use the dark auora.
"Hey thanks for the spell", Jake said quickly before going back to his bow.
"It was nothing...but, Jeff your spells seem quite strong for your level, I could teach you a thing or two, we could pratice in the feilds."
"No thanks. We can't leave the village" I declined.
"Oh c'mon how do you think I got that strong?" She asked.
"Spamming grave"
"...fine but at least thake these they're light crystals, could be useful." she sighed before placing 4 light shards down and walking out of the room.
"Well I should use them...Rem may your holy light shines apon these. Bless them with your streanth" the 4 shards became a yellow light and flowed into my staff. The message "Jeff learned Ray!" and "Jeff learned Health!" both appeared. "I don't trust her..." I mumbled
TO BE CONTINUED

[Chosen of Mana]

"ALL ARCHERS & MAGES MUST REPORT TO THE CITY WALLS IMMEDITLY"
"Well that's our cue. Let's get Jake" I said.
"What do you think they want though" Lauren asked.
"Long Range assult simple as that" Jake said in a know-it-all-voice.
"Well adios! Adue!" I yelled before running off.
LATER...
"Spread!" I yelled launching another spell, hitting a Sand Worm.
"Gale!"
"Burrrrn baby Eruption!"
"Gale"
"Ya ready? Air Thrust!"
"C'mon Healing Wind!"
Jake and I were launching of our pitiful spells while other people were using Shooting Star and Holy Lance. We felt pethitic. Jake moreso than I. Then I relized I had Ray.
"Heven's light guide us! Ray!" Near my target, a dragon, an orb of light appeared and flew foewords launching 10 beams of light before flying back launching 10 more,"Wow!" The dragon and the surrounding foes all disappeared. If such small amounts of power can grant me this then imagine what Shizel has! Even more important not to trust her.
TO BE CONTINUED

[Chosen of Mana]

Bosses started to approch the walls now, it was looking bad, we were done for when luaren and shizel ran up
"Everyone come over here", Shizel yelled to us, I looked to Jake and shrugged before running over, "Stand here" She yelled pointing to an oddly colored tile, as we stepped on to it it started to glow.
"Wha--" Lauren managed to gasp.
"Huh?" Jake murmered
"It's a teleporter, she must have stole it from a dungeon" I exsplained
"Right o" She reponded, "You three show great power, your the only ones who can stop this but first you must get stronger, this teleporter will bring you to a safe world, neither Celestia nor Infernia but draconis, that place is on a diffrent surver, you'll be safe there, in this game because we can't log out if we lose we die"
"But you..." Jake mumbled
"I'll be fine" She said, "NOW GO!"
"Fine..." Jake and Lauren sobbed
"Fair well..." I said with faluce hope.
"God speed" She replied.
The teleporter wirred and we found our selves over a thousand feet up flying to the ground, we needed something to lessen our fall.
"Spread!" I yelled, waving my staff but nothing appeared, "Air thrust? Eruption!?! Ray!" Nothing happened, we were going to die.

WILL JEFF AND CO MAKE IT, WHY WON'T HIS SPELLS WORK, WHY AM I ASKING YOU, WHO AM I, FIND OUT NEXT TIME IN TRAPPED
REPLIES WOULD B NICE!!!!!![/u][/i]

[Chosen of Mana]

The ground got closer and closer, we were going to hit hard when some1 yelled "WIRLWIND" and we were caught up in a green tornado, it did hurt but not alot.
"What was that?" I asked Jake and Lauren, that spell wasn't an Inferni or Celesti spell
"Not sure" Jake just shrugged it off
"Y were we falling in the first place?" Lauren ingored myquestion and relied with her own.
"Either the pad was broken OR shizel wants us to die"
"No way! She saved our lives!"
"And..."
"Your wrong" Lauren yelled, she was too trusting.
"Fine lets see who cast that spell now--" I started to say when some one jumped out.
"It was me" yelled the boy, he had light skin and was only 4'5"ish, he was really frail his brown eyes filled with fear and his hands clutched a sword, "Are you here to kill me?" he asked, how could we kill him? This was just a game...wait!
"Did the log out system break down here too?" I asked him.
"Yes, the people who worked here announced it, you don't look like your from here..." He said quitely.
"Where from Eternia" I stated.
"No wonder you didn't stop your fall with a spell! Here come with me!" He yelled.
We followed him to a large town on the ocean, there we entered a yellow brick biulding with the word Shop on it, "Mister, mister, there's eternia people here!" the boy yelled as we walked into a small room with a couch in the center and a computer in the corner against the yellow walls.
"Eternia" Said a twenty year old boy with a voice full on enthusiasm, he had brown hair and eyes and an adverage build, "How'd u get here"
"From the sky!" the boy yelled.
"We were sent here by a telaporter and it malfunctioned so we ended up about 1000ft up" Lauren said wincing from the mear memory.
"I tried to stop the fall but none of my spells worked"
"Well the magic systems of Eternia and Draconis differ, there's no Ice element so magic cast by Eternians won't work, in eternia what planet are you from any ways?"
"Infernia" Jake answered
"Oh that place, come over here" he pointed to the computer, "Put your wepons on the table" Whe did so. Three cards came out of a slot underneith and three divices that looked like the digivices from the 3rd season of digimon appeared. I picked them up, 'Jeff, ID no 30800e Class Inferni Mage','Lauren, Id no 30801e, class Inferni fighter','Jake, Id no 30800d class, wind swordian'.
"Huh?" I gasped looking at jake's card, Wind Swordian? And his Id ended with a D.
"Well it looks as if the computer considers one of your friends as a swordian" the older boy laughed, "According to his stats he is too."
"What's a swordian" Lauren asked
"In Draconis they're essentially 5 classes; swordian, swordsman archer, fighter and musician. Swordian are the main class they wield special swords that grow stronger with them, Dylmos of fire, Alwright or water & ice, Chailter or earth, Celemate or thunder and Intignios of wind each allow the wielder to cast magic, although they're called swordians they may not use their blade too much. Those with Awright focus on healing and Celemate uses magic for exsample and anyone who uses Intignios is also an archer."
"K..."
"You can regester here is you want" He offered, "It's free"
"Well..." I looked back at lauren and jake who were nodding, "Sure why not?

END CHAPTER 1 W00T
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[Chosen of Mana]

btw here's a basic overview of the classes of draconis

Swordians
-Fire: Sword based, magic attacks do crap damage but has the most physical moves
-Water: Magic based, also has theivery moves, can heal
-Wind: Mainly uses archery, magic is crud, decent sword skills
-Earth: Best sword skills, naturally takes 30% less dam from earth and fire, 2nd best magic, knows darkness spells
-Thunder: Magic based, sword is sh*t, knows spells from all elements

Swordsmen: Guess
Archer: Ditto
Fighter: Same
Musician: hits enemys with loud assults of notes of helps allies withthem

[Fall Out Kio†]

Wow! Cool! This story's really exiting!

[Chosen of Mana]

"Tiger Blade" I yelled slashing up then down, the third zombie fell with a groan.
"Ice Tronado" Yelled Lauren, pointing her sword Awright in the air, a wirlwind fill with chuncks of ice encompassed the rest of the zombies, leaving only the zombifyed Leon.
Let me exsplain. It was about 3 days ago, we registered then we started to take odd jobs elimanating monsters. I was an earth swordian, weild Chalter in the front row, all out attack!!! Laur had chosen to be a thief and weild Awright and become a water swordian and Jake weilds Intignios and a bow.
"Here we go" I yelled, "Flying Dragon!!!" I flew forwords with my sword in front of me, stabbing Leon before leaping back.
"Acid Rain" Lauren yelled before black and red rain fell, lowering Leon's defence, "Snipe Roar!" She preformed a move identical to mine.
"Arrow storm!", 10 arrows flew past me from Jake, at Leon, he groaned before falling, "Wow that was easy" Jake started to complain.
"Easy huh?" Lauren asked, "Think you could handle hundreds of zombies?"
"Sure"
"Good because here they come!!!" She yelled pointing at the advancing army.
Me and jake ran at them while lauren started to cast blizzard, "Flying Dragon!" I yelled taking out a few.
"Vortex!" Jake yelled creating a wirlwind around him self while jumping upwords.
"BLIZZARD!!!" Lauren cried as crystals of ice appeared and thrashed around the feild, every zombie fell. We were satrting to walk out when we herd a loud roar...

[Chosen of Mana]

I'm not gonna update till I get replies...

[Fall Out Kio†]

Why???

[Chosen of Mana]

hearing some 1 reply is like some1 saying "this was worth reading" 4 an author, sry but can't continue now, btw what do you like better, Witch, Healer or Ninja

[Fall Out Kio†]

ninja i think

[kittygal]

i might reply but i'll need 2 state somthin like the first post in the story can i